This guy wrote two different versions (going above and beyond = love it).
(The poor man cried because he was poor but someone gave him a home and food to eat so he cried/The poor man cried because he collected money for Takis but there were no more.)
(The poor man cried because he was a hobo and he lived in a dumpster and he had to eat garbage).
(This one is written very nicely, so no need to translate :)
Compared to what they have been writing, these are pretty good. I know they all still need a lot of work but we're getting there.
We will have a little more practice tomorrow with visualizing. They will each write several sentences and then they will read it to a partner. The partner will then draw a picture of what they are visualizing. We'll see how that goes. :) Good night!
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